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Namaskar, Salam, Adaab Di, Kiya kehne , aik or gana, wah ji, Bohat acha gaya as usual lekin ab apki bhi bari hai Urdu ki class lene ki bcos ager ap itna acha gati hain tu phir diction bhi perfect hona chahiye. Aik Bohat hi badi hiccup jo shayed kisi ko mehsoos nahin huwe, mujhe herat hai ke kese miss ho gaye app se, Arvindji se or baqi sunne waloun se??? App ne gaya Ishq Tu Hai Humara Sanam. jabke line aise hona chahiye thei Ishq Hai Tu Humara Sanam. Bohat farq padta hai 1 word age peche kar dene se, aik tu originality khatm ho jati hai lyrics ki doosre wazn mein farq aa jata hai , Ji apke wazan mein nahin sher ke wazn mein, lol- Aapne word Naam ko flat gaya, Iske alawa bhi mehsoos huwa ke khule gale se nahin gaya or Doob ker feel nahin dala, abb doobne ka kiya dar hai, teraki tu ati hi hogi na . Apke liye Urdu ki class Lazimi Hai ajj se....Khuwaboun Mein jahan gaya wahan Urdu ka pronunciation theek nahin tha.Sonu Nigam, Udit Narayan sabhi Urdu ki class lety rahe hain perfect diction ke liye.... Kush rahye or suroun mein gati rahye.. All the Best,Choti Di, Sitarah |
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