Part of Your World - The Little Mermaid.wav
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Rae
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| Joined on Nov. 11 2006 |
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"'Tis Better To Have Loved And Lost Than To Have never Loved At All"
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| u play the flute so do i well just a intermediate |
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on Feb. 1 2008 |
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| i gotta agree with kwenami...you were kinda having the slow then fast then slow again pacing...its good for this song..but you were kinda all over the place with the notes..and the sound when you play the flute were kinda weird...(the beat for the song was there..only the sound was a lil off?..LOL...) anyways...im sure you can do better than this..^^..keep on practicing and im sure you'll get that...-shakeera- (was in a band as a vocal singer until now,played piano for 2 years,been playing flute for 8 years)..just a bit of my background..so you won;t think that im blabbing nonsense XD KEEP PRACTICING ^^ |
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on Aug. 24 2007 |
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could use alot of work but still its quite good  |
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on May. 13 2007 |
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I'm going to be mean. I love the preformance, but I know you can do so much better simply because it's things itjust didn't sound like you knew about. Sorry in advance if something I say offends you. =x
To start, through the entire song you broke up your notes, most of this piece is slurred or legato. Connect the notes more so you get a better flow to the song. Your stacco's were done well, but at a few points you changed the beat around it to make it seem clearer. Instead when you blow the note, your tongue should be touching the top of your mouth more than your front teeth - will make a huge difference and you don't have to slow down for the same effect. Tone & Breathing - Bigger breaths. It's probably my biggest issue, so I know what you mean. A lot of flutists ar gets wasted because you're spliting it, so you need double the air you think you need. Don't breath on bar lines. Dynamic/volume changes. Make them BIG. This piece is dramatic, you need to follow those dynamics more.They were followed somewhat, but if you pay more attention to them you can do a lot more with it. A lot of the time I heard some change, but your forte was close to mf, and your piano was more like mp. Tempo...me and my group have issues with this as well, you speed up and slowed down. Not a lot, but it was noticable..and there's a few parts where it should be written to play at a fast tempo, or back to the main tempo...you slowed down on one part (50 seconds ish into the song) which was good, but you didn't slow down enough. Make the change huge so people can notice it, and it gives it a better overall effect. Have more fun with it. Play around untill it sounds perfect, it's what musicians are here for. It'll show if you work hard at it, the work you've already done shows. If you add those it'll help people who aren't musicians to be able to hear teh emotion in your playing as well. It's what we're here for. ^^ Good luck, keep up the practicing. You did a great job on your own. ^^ -Sara (Trombonist and vocalist, used to be a flutist...first instrument. ;] been playing about 3 years for Tbone, 4 for flute, vocals since forever. Just a background so you know I'm not just so loser criticizing :P) |
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on Apr. 30 2007 |
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| very nice....... i play the flute too i have a thing of me singing that song, u should check it out! Happy Easter |
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on Apr. 8 2007 |
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