The Valley_Edited.JPG
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blue_heel_bangalore
From India
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| Joined on Feb. 20 2008 |
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"Dream big, doesn’t matter if you didn’t achieve them. At least you had the pleasure of dreaming it."
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The Valley: My thoughts on terrorism plaguing the India. (Rewritten). Sketch on A4 size paper.
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My poetry folder
on Jun. 9 2008
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| Size: 113.5kb |
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| This is very close to being a poem but sadly youdon't care about the reader. Why should I enjoythis poem/ Just because you wrote it?It needs to engage the reader. Ask the reader aquestion. But you must give an answer as well.For example. Is this the place of Gods or of fools?The Ganges will not stop for either of them. |
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| This reminds me so much of our civil war--a complete waste of lives, because it was the wrong way to fix a problem that needed to be dealt with. As usual you put a lot of feeling into this poem. I feel like you do 100%. |
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 An excellent expression of hatred on terrorsim and wars..  you have said it well. The feeling is there deep in your heart. |
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| If only a poem could turn the tide of hate to love our world would have so joy in it and paradise would begin at last In this garden known has Earth |
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